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An After Dinner Ramble
Everything's Fine Dear
Prejudice

Misdirection
Girls Night Out
World War Three in 500 Words


Everything's Fine Dear
Years ago I remember hearing a sketch “All's going Well” with Frankie Howerd and Margaret Rutherford. There are probably many variations on the theme and I'm hoping this is my idea and not another, almost forgotten version dragged up from the deep cellars of my memory.

It it is mine then the scene is a back garden with the slightly dotty lady of the house talking to her husband on a mobile phone.

MRS SMITH
Hello dear. How did the orientation day go?

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
That’s good. And you’re all ready for the interview? I'm sure you'll get the job.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Me? Everything’s fine here. I don't know what you mean by that tone in my voice

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Well all right then. The front garden wall collapsed. It’s nothing. I can sort it out. You worry about the interview.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
I’ll get a builder around as soon as possible. I’ll get quotes for the front lawn at the same time. Concentrate on the interview.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
No silly. A few bricks haven’t ruined the lawn. It’s the tyre tracks.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
The tracks from the lorry that knocked the wall down. Don’t worry about it. Are you still preparing for your interview?

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
No, I won’t be able to pick you up tomorrow. The car needs a new windscreen. It’ll have to be replaced before I can drive it.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Some bricks fell on it. Don't worry. I'll call the windscreen people as soon they're able to get to the car.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
They’ve already pulled the lorry back. The car got a couple of dents but it doesn’t look too bad.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
No. The breakdown people can’t touch it until the builders say they can.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
It was pushed a little way into the living room and they want to check the wall before the car's moved.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Calm down dear. You’ll fail the interview if you let yourself get upset.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
They’ll move the car just as soon as they get those jack things in place. Once the upstairs stops resting on it they’ll be able to pull it out.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Oh don’t be so melodramatic. Of course the house isn’t going to fall down. They’re not even sure that they’ll have to pull it down.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
Please calm down. Screaming like that is not going to help. With the house insurance and the compensation everything will be fine.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
You said that you were going to renew it. It was the night I dropped your wallet in the waste disposal unit. You were upset then but you definitely said that you wanted to be sure that it was done right.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
They did say that the lorry was stolen so it wasn’t insured. Is that going to be a problem, dear?

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
All you have to do is calm down and do well in the interview tomorrow. We’ll be all right with the extra money and we’ll have to move for your new job anyway. It won't be so bad.

(PAUSE)

MRS SMITH
No it’s not the last straw and I’m not discussing a divorce while you’re in this state. Call me back after the interview and you've got the job.

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Prejudice

Over a period of time I have come to the conclusion that only prejudiced people can prove that they are not prejudiced. I should explain that I'm not referring to full blown, card carrying bigots but to the vast majority of well meaning people who thinks it is a shame that others are not as nice and as normal as they are.

Their prejudice is there and shows up in odd statements like “He's very nice for one of them,” meaning “The rest of them are not nice.” How about, “You wouldn't think he was one of them” leaving the question, “what do you think they are really like?”

The real trouble comes because people are just trying to live their own lives but they are being constantly bombarded by a mass of conflicting propaganda. It rarely matches personal experience and the result is conversations on the lines of:- 'They should all go home but not that nice family down the road. You'd think they're English if you talk to them'.

You get other strange conflicts.

At the moment, the newspapers seem full of Romanian gangs flocking to this country to rob us and pillage the benefits system. There might be some truth in it but Romanian seems to be the new Paki; a derogatory term for Eastern Europeans and others from the fringes of the EU.

The question for me is; If it is so bad for Romanian gangs to be doing it, is it somehow all right for good old fashioned British gangs to grab our money?

If I was at all cynical then I would suggest that prejudice can be helpful in covering up the real problems. It's easier to blame Romania than to start looking into the incompetence and inefficiency of the offices involved.

The problem I have is that I don't think I am prejudiced against anyone except druggies. I believe in an infinite god who created an infinitely varied universe. You can't celebrate God if you cannot celebrate and embrace the differences He created.

If I see a coloured person I see someone with a completely different history and background to mine. If I show an interest how do I prove that I'm not saying 'you're a foreigner in my country'?

I can understand why nigger is so reviled but I can't understand why Negro fell out of favour. Surely it refers to the distinct features of the Negroid race? What's more it is easier to say than 'of African descent'.

It seems to be a feature of the anti-bigotry industry, find something wrong, no matter how obscure and change it. So, how long will it be before African descent is shortened to AD and becomes equally derogatory.

Maybe I'm denigrating efforts to end prejudice. I might sound cynical again but it seems to me that success would put a lot of people out of work. While they're justifying their existence the result is an anti-bigotry industry that can be as bigoted as a conventional bigot, though on the opposite side of the fence. I apologise for overusing the word bigot but I really do not see much difference between the two extremes.

One of the largest anti-bigotry industries is of course the Women's Rights Movement. Again, firmly believing in diversity, I do not believe that women are inferior but they are different mentally as well physically. Extreme feminists seem to demand that these differences are ignored so that men and women are treated equally.

In terms of intelligence and basic rights I agree but what if the fight is taken too far? Are not feminists saying man is perfect and we aspire to be like them?

It comes down to the question, is the prejudice real or imagined? There is always a little rivalry between them and us. For example, no one expects football fans to cheer on all teams equally.

I don't think that I have to agree with everyone. Neither do I think that a little friendly rivalry is that harmful though the the exception could be to do with sexuality.

I have long found sexuality less straight forward than people assume. I've seen people declaring that they are completely straight then become openly gay after a few drinks before going back to being straight the next day. There's a whole range of relationships for a writer to explore that are just ignored.

However some leave me uncomfortable. If I'm talking to cross dressers is it prejudiced to admit that I'm not fond of the packaging offering something different to the contents? Is it wrong of me to protectively cross my legs when they talk about the ultimate snip?

When I'm talking to the girls, we talk about different attitudes as well as host of other subjects. It is nothing more than an exchange of ideas and the girls accept them as such. However taking opinions or ideas out of context is probably the easiest way of proving just about anything.

It was probably unfair of me to only accuse the anti-bigotry industry of having an agenda. Taking a position then defending it at all costs with a complete disregard for truth is a good definition of politics.

Words taken out of context is just a minor casualty but how do you speak honestly and openly without offending someone?

Recently I wrote a story about a group of cross dressers caught up in a pub brawl. It contained a line about a couple of guys who... ...did not like [their pub] being invaded by 'poofs, weirdos and freaks'

Sarah, a cross dresser who partly inspired one of the characters had no complaints about the story. More serious friends of mine were concerned that the line could be taken out of context and brand me as prejudiced and I am back to the problem of proving that I am not prejudiced.

I have thought about it and decided there is another group of people I don't want to be associated with – politicians. If people can't see where my sympathies lie by the general tone of my tales then it is their problem, not mine.

On another level, the next time I'm leaning against the bar of my local and Sarah begins massaging my back, I won't smugly think that I'm tolerating a slightly drunk cross dresser. I'll probably think as I did last time. She's very good at it and I feel a lot more relaxed.

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An After Dinner Ramble

Some years ago I received a letter from America. It was a surprise because I did not know anyone there and I had never done business with any any American firm.
Like many people I stared at the envelop wondering who it was from before deciding that the best way of finding out was to open it. In one way it was a mistake because curiosity was replaced by bafflement as I tried to take in the contents.

It was a pile of documents headed New York District Court, District of New York. I managed to decipher them only to discover that I was suing Sotherbys, the auctioneers.
Ploughing through the papers I found a reference to the Hornby trainset I had sold through them nearly five years previously. More significantly I found an acknowledgement that I would not have to pay anything.

The case rumbled on for the next five years with just the occasional letter from Sweden. Why Sweden I don't know. Maybe they had the cheapest international postal service.
Finally it was all settled and I received a cheque. It was the first dollar cheque that I had ever seen and it turned out that the bank cashier had not seen many.

Since then I have received a number of dollar cheques and it always felt good showing the cashier how to fill in their forms.

These later cheques were always preceded by a business contract containing the line that we would all be bound by the laws of the State of whoever I was dealing with resided.
The last one was Virginia.

If my brush with the New York District Court was surreal then these contracts were ridiculous. Like verbal contracts, they were not worth the paper that they written on. For the amounts involved there was no way that I could go charging across the Atlantic to take on the other party in a Virginian court.

Likewise there was no way that I could be hauled off to court for any alleged breach on my part. We all operated in a spirit of trust and so far, I have not been let down. The overall effect is that I take paperwork in general far less seriously than I used to.

The last time I had any interest in the American legal system I was just an interested observer. It involved SCO versus IBM, later SCO versus Novell, followed by SCO versus anyone who might get them out of the hole they had dug for themselves.

If SCO had won then it might have impacted on some of my activities but even so I was branded as a Communist, anti Capitalist supporter of terrorism. I did not feel badly about it since I was only one of millions around the world. However the rantings of assorted lawyers, senior business officials did keep me vaguely interested in the case.

So what was I doing that was so terrible? I use Linux and Open Source software instead of Microsoft Windows products. Apple Mac may be upset as well but there was no mention of them backing SCO.

More than one commentator on the case mentions FUD, creating fear, uncertainty and doubt. SCO's case certainly seems weak for a $5 billion dollar lawsuit.

Much of the case revolved around intellectual property rights and who owned what. It was heard in Utah.
Apart from claiming to own computer code that was subsequently shown to belong to others, SCO claimed that Open Source was against the American constitution because it denied code writers exclusive rights. Since it is owned by all then it was definitely communist.

Open Source is unfair competition because it's free. What business can compete with that?

Because it is freely available on the Internet without licensing or registration it can be downloaded and used by terrorists.

What amazes me is that a company could invest so much in a court case on what proved to be such flimsy grounds unless its intention was solely to spread FUD on behalf of Microsoft. Since it went bankrupt even that idea seems equally flimsy.

Again the lawyers and judges took it all seriously as failed case piled up against failed case. No one else did especially the Open Source Community. I just sat back mildly amused at all the huffing and blowing.

It all reinforced the notion I've had for years. It's a waste of time starting a claim and if you find yourself a defendant then forget about the facts of the case. Find ways to wind the opposition up. The more you confuse them then the better your chances are. It is certainly difficult to imagine what else SCO were relying on and they had been successful in the past.

Unfortunately, or perhaps fortunately, I have only been able to test my theory with parking tickets. In the last thirty odd years I've had four or five of them. I have not had to pay one.

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Misdirection
Not being good at short stories,
I thought I'd have fun when
A writer's group I attend
Suggested we write about lust.

It was one of those times when
The story was complete in my mind.
It's about a twelve year old boy
Who is beginning the changes
That will turn him into a man.

With emotions more intense,
With feelings undreamed of before.
Aware of his new found strength,
He imagined pumping away,
To dominate his hearts desire.

It's strange, some worry about this tale.
Fear not. It's in their mind, not mine.
For with his birthday approaching,
How else would he wait for his new bike?

Revised 13/08/2011

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Girl's Night Out

Disclaimer
The views expressed by the characters in this story are their own and do not represent the author's views. They are included, along with the strong language to provide a proper chronicle of the events depicted.

It was their regular girls night out, a chance to relax with friends and have fun. At first the regulars found it difficult not to stare at the bulging biceps, tattoos and severe masculine features. Some even noticed their adam's apples. The girls accepted the banter aimed at them, often giving as good as they got, so gradually, attitudes settled down to a bemused acceptance.

The exceptions were a couple of guys who saw their pub as a bastion for 'real' men and did not like it being invaded with 'poofs, weirdos and freaks'. Rather than go to the pub on ladies night they sat indoors discussing what should be done about it.

“We've got to do something otherwise we'll have Blacks, Pakis and all sorts of foreign muck in there,” Joe said, tucking into his chicken vindaloo and Danish lager.

Normally they would have done what red blooded macho men do when they're spoiling for a fight. They would have got steadily drunker while plotting more and more outlandish ways of getting rid of the girls. However on that particular night one of their friends arrived mid session.

Black Harry had spent the last twenty four hours in police custody being questioned about stolen credit cards. If he had been suspected of murder or assault it would not have been so bad but credit card fraud was a bit white collar and did not fit in with his image.

He needed to re-establish himself in front of his cronies and clearing out a pub to make way for themselves seemed a good way of doing it. He made a few phone calls and soon had a group of mates gathered together.
As they entered the pub, Black Harry saw a number of the regulars already settled in. He also noticed the CCTV cameras and that the landlord was already eyeing them suspiciously. He quietly stood chatting to his mates about football and the new phone that he was going to buy.

He noticed one of the ladies searching her bag for cigarettes and matches and without making it too obvious they all drank up.

They all reached the door together and even before they were outside the jostling and the insults began. Louisa glanced at Black Harry and saw the look in his eyes. She was a striking girl, petite, a natural blonde, stylish with a relaxed quiet manner. All she saw in Black Harry's eyes was vicious malevolence and she shuddered before returning to her table.

Black Harry led his gang outside, laughing triumphantly at their first victory.

Louisa had seen something else in Black Harry. Lust. It was not heterosexual or homosexual but a deep desire to control, humiliate and dominate. He saw Louisa as a natural target and she knew that he would now go after her until he had won.

If nothing else, they would keep coming to the pub. Black Harry would encourage his gang and their friends to play up, driving out the quieter regulars, changing its character.

The gang showed no signs of dispersing but they were not doing anything wrong. Maybe they were a little boisterous, a little noisy, making the odd insult just loud enough for the girls to hear.

Instead of sitting down again, Louisa stood quietly, coming to a decision before kicking off her high heels, bending to reach her tight fitting skirt and ripping it along the seams so that it did not restrict her movements.
As Major Lewis Stevenson, SAS he was used to reading people. It had kept him alive during tours of Afghanistan and Iraq, helping him to win the Military Cross and three Mentions in Despatches. He had been tired when he had received his honourable discharge, tired of the horrors of war and tired of living up to his families expectations.

Lewis/Louisa liked what she had become and was not going let some yobbo spoil it. She was almost looking forward to the fight. For once, she was defending her freedom, her way of life and her right to choose.

As Louisa prepared herself, Wendy stood up to join her. She was a little shorter than average, overweight and as a man outrageously camp. As a woman she was just outrageous, almost a caricature of a cross dresser.
Most of the regulars who normally laughed at her antics were surprised that she was not rushing hysterically around yelling that they were all about to be killed. Instead, they saw the steely glint and her look of determination.

With varying degrees of reluctance, the other girls stood up to support their friends as Louisa led the way outside.

The noise subsided as the louts turned to face the girls.

“Let's not have any trouble, lads.” Louisa said quietly, “Let's go back inside and I'll buy you all a drink.”

She noticed that a couple of the lads started to step forward, ready to accept but stopped when Black Harry did not move.

“Fuck you.” he snarled, “I don't want a fucking freak like you buying me a fucking drink.”

“OK. How about going home so we can enjoy our drinks.”

“Fuck you.” Harry snarled again, “You fucking freaks should be locked away. You fuck off.”

It was stalemate, the tension was almost physical and Wendy could not contain herself any longer.

“All this talk of fucking me is making me horny,” she simpered, “How about that alley, babe?”

Harry glared at her. At first it was just shock and then a terrible anger flooded through him. He lunged forward.

No one can describe exactly what happened next. It was all so fast but suddenly Black Harry was lying on his back with Louisa's foot in his armpit and her hands grabbing his wrist twisting it painfully.

“Ow you're breaking my arm.” Harry wailed plaintively, “Get him off.”

The rest of the gang moved uncertainly forward, unsettled by their leader's unexpected defeat. The girls also advanced, reassured by their champion's success.

One of the lout's nerve failed him. He turned and ran. It was enough for his mates. They also turned and fled while the girls charged triumphantly forward.

“Someone hold him.” Louisa commanded in full military mode. Wendy flopped down on top of him as Louisa tried to round up the rest of the girls. It was as well that she did. The girls had caught up with some of the louts and the noise was attracting attention. The emergency service was getting strange calls about groups of angry women setting about poor defenceless youths.

When the police went to the pub, all they found was a group of cross dressers, perhaps a little flushed and excited, helping Louisa to pin up her skirt. They checked the area and found a number youngsters hurrying home sporting black eyes, cuts and bruises, too ashamed to admit who had got the better of them.

Wendy's idea of holding Black Harry had been to kneel across him, straddling his shoulders. On one level he had nightmares about incredibly large pairs of pink knickers surrounded by amazingly thick legs descending towards his face to suffocate him or - considering what the knickers contained - something far worse. Winded when his back hit the ground, and with one arm still useless he waited helplessly as Wendy cheerfully explored his chest, stomach and even down inside his underwear.

Wendy's ample back hid what was going on from the public while some of the regulars stood at the door looking on. They were glad that the louts had been dispersed before they had to leave. Though they would never admit it, they were enjoying the unfolding drama.

The regulars always enjoyed a little shocked embarrassment at Wendy's antics though this scene was special. Always one to play to an audience, Wendy could not help displaying something she had discovered.

She unzipped Harry's trousers and worked his underwear down a little to show that, at a baser level, Harry was actually enjoying her ministrations. He knew that his body had betrayed him. When word got out it would destroy the macho image that his friends expected. It was his most most humiliating experience of the night.

He left town, was never seen again and there was no more trouble at the pub on the girl's night out.


Hi Peter.
  Tee Hee.  I had a friend about four years ago. An ex-SAS chap. ( well as Ex as you can get in that line of work), And He was a  T-Girl.

Used to get out and about in Woolwich and Plumstead, Getting into all sorts of trouble. So this actually sounds closer to reality than you knew when you penned it!.
xx
Sarah B

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WW111 in 500 words
Introduction
Anyone who has ever sought advice over writing a short story has been told that you can always find unnecessary words and remove them.
So how far can you take that advice?
The original challenge was to write a complete story on a large topic in 500 words. I may have cheated by making it a play instead of an essay but why not? Minimalism is minimalism and we've all seen the basic format of a reporter talking to the studio from the scene of events.
The finished play is 450 words. So yes, you can always shorten a short story.
The Play
Stage left – Anchorman. Stage right – David.
Lighting dim. Spotlight on character speaking.

Anchorman
The Department of Defence in Washington has confirmed that a thermonuclear device was detonated over Northern Iraq at approximately 1a.m. EST this morning. All communications from the area are badly disrupted and as yet there are no details of casualties.
Our Washington correspondent is David Bartlett. David what is the reaction over there?

David
There's a real sense of confusion, even panic, John. The White House issued a brief statement saying that the full might of the United States will be deployed to protect it's interests and it's allies in the area.
As you know the European stock exchanges closed within half an hour of opening with prices in free fall. London is faring little better and there is real concern about what happens when the New York Stock Market opens.
With fears of other attacks on major oil producing centre there's talk of oil reaching $1000 a barrel.

Anchorman
So how will the White House react?

David
The President left by helicopter a little while ago with a large contingency of senior staff. Junior staff appear to be leaving by car at high speed.
Unconfirmed reports from the Pentagon suggest that an area in Southern Russia has been attacked.
We're relying on the same news agency reports as you. The Russian premier has announced that Russia will resist any incursion to it's sovereignty be they rebel units of their army or foreign governments.
There is concern that...

Pause

Anchorman
David we seem to have lost contact. Can you hear me.
David
Yes but there is a lot of interference. To add to the administrations problems Washington now has a power cut following a bright flash to the North. Stand by for a moment...
A fellow reporter from the mid west was talking to his studio. It was reporting that multiple rocket launches have occurred from silos. He has now lost the satellite link with them.

Curtain left closes. Anchorman gone.

Anchorman (cont.)
Fears are growing the flash we saw was an attack on New York as reprisal for the destruction of two Russian cities and that the United States has retaliated in force.
Do you have any more information in the studio?

Hello London can you hear me. John, are you there? Is anyone there?
In case you can still hear me...
 Aargh another flash, I can't see. Why no sound of the explosion? How far away wa...

Curtain closes completely.

Off Stage (otherworldly)
Most people died unaware that a war had started. Dust from the explosions enveloped the planet in a cooling shroud. Radiation and cold finished what the bombs began. Earth finally found peace.

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